ehehhe! I saw this last night and was blown away but I was so tired after uploading that species sheet late x3 I thought i'd save commentary till thismornin so it could be somewhat more coherent and not "eeewhakeepeeweewuvit!" xD

Dash! I never expected you to choose her ^^ this is indeed a pleasant surprise. I don't belive shes had any fans in the past, shes a rather old RP character. (though her age is in the teens) I diiiiid kinda draw her recently but by no means colored [link] and you can see here here in the second line: [link]
the ref was so old it had her old star design ^^ I changed it from the overused/kiddy five star to the four point guiding star look. If its too hard to change it I won't ask you to!

But gosh this pic is excellent, im really happy to receive another artwork in your style ^^ its so unique! You always do your eyes so beautifully shiney and real with depth to them. The colours are getting really fantastic and I think your fur style has improved alot from drawing all those kitsunes x3. She looks so elegant and lovely dancing up there in the clouds. walking on air you might say with those little paw wings of hers heheh.
The thing I most ADORE and am impressed with about this picture are actually those little wings. You drew them straight to her design but gave them all those little details that makes them seem real. I can just imagine them flapping right now ^^. Great work there.
My only constructive crits for you would be that the left backleg seems kinda twisted a little too far (hard pose though I know >.<!) like the paw is turned out too far for the bones of the rest of the leg to allow. Lastly that her head is slightly more foxlike in its pointyness. Thats always been your style though ;}

But yes! you finished before me xP i'll try not to take too long on mine but I have biiig plans for it

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Interesting!

I particularly love how you drew the wings on her front-right paw. They look fantastic.

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Thank you! I've been working on wings lately.

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Okay, I was way too lazy to rotate the leg, but I did fix the star. I like the four-pointed better, too. Thanks, Holly, I'm glad you like it! You have so many awesome characters, it was hard to choose.

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---Tyrion Lannister, from George R. R. Martin's A Game of Thrones

wow thanks she looks so awesome now <3

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